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Dude, I was honestly finding it a little hard to read the tones in there. I think I got what was happening, but for a moment there I was confused why he wound up introducing himself and saying who he was when she like...IMMEDIATELY said who he was and asked what did he want. It made it a bit confusing... I do like it, though. Nice build-up.